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Post by timbo889015 on May 4, 2012 16:18:29 GMT -5
How can I begin to adequately describe my sentiments for the one I hold so dear? How could I express to you in words, the delight I get when you draw near? Delighted, yet still nervous from my fears. Maybe it is because you are my everything, I couldn't bear it if I did something wrong. Maybe it's in the way I see you. when with you I feel like I belong. This is why goodbye is always prolonged. So know that when I go, and you are all alone, you're not really alone, you're still in my heart. I carry you with me everywhere, so that we will never grow apart. You will always reside inside my heart.
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Post by larsenmcallirhoe on May 9, 2012 12:56:29 GMT -5
excellent use of similies and overall metaphor. you have vastly improved your poetry since i have first read your works on older forums. do you remember the defunct poetry friends. asmuch as i miss ol;d forums we do improve. i love and miss the people who come and go.this reminded me of the old gang...
larsen
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