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Post by kimlkitchen1 on Dec 31, 2013 17:37:04 GMT -5
This Kiss
"to Javier"
I this a dream? Or is this real? How a man like this; Can make you feel.
He drove over thirty miles; Can you see? For just that moment; To be with me.
From this man I adore; As he opened the door; I was happy as I could be;
I ran as fast as I could; Over where he stood; I waited my whole life you see.
I jumped in his arms without a care; And everyone did stare; As he picked me up and gave me a kiss; I never thought I could feel like this;
Slow down, slow down; Can't you see? To savor this moment; What it means to me?
He sat me down; Gently on the ground; As tender as he could be; For this moment, this kiss; I will keep for an eternity.
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Post by larsenmcallirhoe on Jan 1, 2014 3:05:59 GMT -5
Excellently written. You are indeed correct to savor the tender moment. I have made like comments on other females poetry in kind like I wish I could make a lady feel like this about me. I can only hope is all I can do, You certainly have a knack with this style of poetry and I really really enjoyed this piece by you. Thank you for sharing....
Victor Michael aka Larsen M. Callirhoe
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